这套练习有十道原创题，混合了电子邮件写作单元的五项技能，从简短检查到完整修改。不给分数，因为目的是看你的习惯是否稳固。
先在纸上写出每道题的答案，再打开详解，对照要点、语气、原因和时间词。错题记录与重测队列适合用来记下失误。
题目
1.（要点） 任务要求你写信给朋友，说明聚会在哪里、几点开始、要穿什么。请用三个短句写出这三项。
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三个要点：地点、时间、服装。参考答案：“The party is at my house, 12 Jalan Bunga. It starts at 6 p.m. on Saturday. Please wear something comfortable, because we will be playing games outside.”
检查每个要点是否有自己的句子和具体细节。
2.（要点） 任务要求写日期、费用和联系人姓名。下面的回复只涵盖了两项，缺了哪一项？“The workshop is on 20 April. Please ask for Mrs Yap at the front desk.”
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缺了费用。日期是 20 April，联系人是 Mrs Yap。改正后可加上：“The fee is RM15.”
3.（正式程度） 写给一位不知道姓名的图书馆员，应选哪一组称呼和结尾？(a) Hi, / Cheers, (b) Dear Sir or Madam, / Yours faithfully, (c) Dear Sir or Madam, / Yours sincerely,
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(b)。没有名字的称呼配 Yours faithfully。(c) 把搭配弄混了，(a) 对图书馆员来说太随意。
4.（正式程度） 改写给校长的版本：“Hey, can we have a longer break on Friday? We’re all tired.”
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“Dear Mr Chong, I am writing to ask whether students could have a longer break on Friday. Many of us are tired after the sports week. I would be grateful for your consideration. Yours sincerely, (name)”
改写去掉了 “Hey” 和 “we’re”，使用了礼貌的请求，并给出了原因。
5.（原因） 用原因连接这两句：“I am late with my homework. I was ill.”
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“I am late with my homework because I was ill.” 也正确：“I was ill, so my homework is late.”
6.（原因） 句子 “I would like a refund because I bought it on Monday” 没有说明投诉的理由。针对一件破了的 T 恤，把原因换成真正的原因。
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“I would like a refund because the T-shirt was torn when I opened the packet.” 购买日期不能说明为什么需要退款，T 恤破了才能。
7.（时间） 改正动词：“Last Sunday I go to my grandmother’s house. Next week I visited her again.”
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“Last Sunday I went to my grandmother’s house. Next week I will visit her again.”
“Last Sunday” 需要一般过去时，“next week” 需要将来时形式。
8.（时间） 这句话的时间词和动词形式互相冲突。请用两种不同的方式改正：“I have seen the film yesterday.”
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方式一，已结束的时间搭配一般过去时：“I saw the film yesterday.”
方式二，不带已结束的时间，使用现在完成时：“I have seen the film twice this month.”
9.（修改，目的） 这是一份草稿。“Dear Mrs Gan, How are you? The weather is hot. My class has a lot of homework. I like English. Yours sincerely, Dina.” 任务要求她询问能否加入演讲社，并说明自己什么时候有空。请用四句话改写。
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“Dear Mrs Gan, I am writing to ask whether I can join the speaking club. I want to join because I would like to speak English more confidently. I am free on Wednesday and Friday after school. Could you please tell me when the next meeting is? Yours sincerely, Dina”
目的在第一句，原因和时间都有了，最后一句要求对方采取行动。关于天气和作业的句子已删除。
10.（综合） 为本页编写的任务：“Your class trip to the science museum has been moved from Tuesday to Thursday. Write an email to a classmate, Kai. Say what has changed, why it changed and what he should bring.” 写一封约六句话的完整邮件。
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示范答案：
“Hi Kai, I am writing to tell you that our trip to the science museum has moved from Tuesday to Thursday. It changed because the museum is closed on Tuesday for repairs. We will still leave school at 8.30 a.m. and come back at 3 p.m. Please bring a packed lunch, a water bottle and RM10 for the workshop. Last week you said you had football on Thursday, so please tell Mr Noor soon if you cannot come. See you on Thursday! Best wishes, Hafiz”
检查：三个要点（变更、原因、要带的东西）都涵盖了。语气非正式，适合同学。原因用了 “because”。时间词一致：“has moved”、“will leave”、“last week you said”。
如果你做错了
- 漏了要点或细节（第 1、2、10 题）： 回到涵盖所有要求的要点。
- 语气或结尾敬语错误（第 3、4 题）： 回到用合适的正式程度开头与结尾。
- 原因没有解释清楚（第 5、6 题）： 回到解释原因而不是罗列事件。
- 时态与时间词冲突（第 7、8 题）： 回到统一使用时间表达。
- 目的不清楚（第 9 题）： 回到修改一封没有写明主要目的的邮件。
摘要选择与改写工作室和写作修改对比视图可以支持这些技能。
如果你重读了课文，同样的错误仍然反复出现，老师可以追溯到它的根源。这正是我们English as a Second Language 线上一对一补习的用途。